Note: this design is just a starting
point, please let me know things you like and don't
like about it. I can go over with you on the phone
in more detail how these pages will play out.
This design for the sub page is based
on the clean look we tried to create from the homepage.
I created a navigation bar along the top ,that when
rolled over with change to green like the homepage,
and when created in flash (if you choose to do that)
-will show the links you can choose from in that section
below. Those links will be black text that turned
to green when rolled over. On the nav bar I placed
the same TKT logo used on the homepage with a piece
of the image used on the homepage to help tie that
into to the sublevel pages. On the right I placed
the category About us text in Black and green, consistent
with the homepage.
I also placed on the right, similar
to the design on the homepage, the image for this
section of the site (in this case the DNA helix).
I also thought it might be nice to have some kind
of quote with in the image. This image can be changed
for each sub page in that category (like for the community
outreach page, if we have pictures to use.
All in all I like the clean look
of this design, and feel it is compliments your homepage
well.
- See
the About us page
- See
the About us page revisions
Notes:On the menu bar please initial
cap the text.
* On the menu bar Community is spelled wrong. Please
check pages for typos.
* The pictures on the menu bar are difficult to
make
out, excluding the DNA helix. Can you sharpen the
images?
* Please remove the white lines running through
the image
on the right as this is distracting.
* The "site search" and "site map"
link should appear in
the same place as the home page.
* Please be sure there is a link on each page to
get
back to the home page. It should be clearly visible
on
each page in the same place and clearly labeled
TKT
home. Will this be the TKT logo?
* We would stay with one color on About Us
and Company
Overview. The green is ok.
- See
about us Revisions 3 and all first level sub page
screen shots
Delete the word DNA from the helix image
The text at the bottom of the graphic should line
up better (the last line -
"to patient in need" - appears as though
it is cut off.) Move the text up
slightly so that it is clearer where the box ends.
At the top of the page, the faded text for Transkaryotic
Therapies next to the
logo should be the full name (add, Inc.)
The Company Overview subsection stays green (does
not turn to black) when you
highlight the other sections ( (i.e. Corporate Directions).
The name should
turn from green back to black when it is not selected.
- See
about us Revisions 4 and all first level sub page
screen shots
On the menu bar, change "Corporate Directions"
to "Directions".
On the menu bar, there is an odd character between
the back slash and
"Rankings" in "Awards/Rankings",
please delete this character.
Please make sure that you spell check the concepts.
Committed is misspelled
under the helix image.
Please use the same font size for all of the text
in the call out quote under
the helix image.
Committed is a different font size, so please make
all of the text consistent.
Please make sure that you do this on all pages.
Change the title "Awards/Rankings" to
"Awards/Events". Please also make this
change on the sub menu that appears for About Us
on the home page.
Please add a line under all of the bold text (i.e.
the platform names) that
will be later linked to other pages on the site.
You currently have it in bold
type. Please underline it as well.
Lighten the bottom half of the helix image. We do
not like how it turns into a
solid black where the quote appears. NOTE: Lighten
the bottom on all images,
not only on the About Us page but on the other sub
pages as well.
Development Platforms
Change the order of the platform names to: Niche
Protein Platform (add the word
"Platform"), Gene Activation Technology,
and Gene Therapy Technology.
Initial cap all of the sub menu names. For ex.,
the t in "technology" is not
capped for either Gene Activation or Gene Therapy
on the menu bar.
Add the following quote under the researcher and
microscope image: Producing
and delivering new therapies for common and rare
diseases.
Delete the text that is currently used for the Overview.
Please use the word
"Place holder" instead.
News Bureau
On the menu bar, officers is misspelled. Again,
please spell check the concepts
going forward.
Delete Legal News from the menu bar. We want to
eventually add it as a section
ut not now.
Move Executive Officers from the News Bureau page
to the About Us page. It
typically appears here. Also, be sure to update
the About Us sub sections as
they appear on the menu bar once you move the Executive
Officers section.
We may want to add a link to the Press Releases
section under Investor
Information since we do not need the releases to
appear on both pages. That
way, we could delete the Press Releases sub section
from News Bureau so that it
is not repetitive.
Investor Information
Add an investor contact at the top of the page,
above the text so that it
stands out. The contact should be:
Justine E. Koenigsberg
Director, Corporate Communications
(617) 349-0271
info@tktx.com
Move the text ("TKTX NASDAQ LISTED") to
the bottom of the image box on the
right of the page. This way, we probably will not
need to include a quote or
any call out text.
Patient Information
Add in this order: Fabry Disease, Hunter Syndrome,
Hemophilia A to the menu
bar. These are the sub sections for Patient Information.
Make sure that each
sub section name is initial capped.
Add the following quote under the clinician and
patient image: Developing
therapies to address unmet medical needs.
Careers
Delete the quote at the top of the page ("See
why our employees are
smiling...").
Add the following quote under the employee meeting
image: The best is yet to
come.
We are planning to take a photo of TKT's HR group
in a meeting with a similar
look to this photo. Once I have this, I will send
it to you.
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